“Warriors Never Die” by Raymond Roy 100 word fiction

PHOTO PROMPT © Krista Strutz

DING DONG!

2am. The headlights of a dark sedan illuminated the honeysuckle hedge by the front walkway. Looking through the side window, the porch light reflected off the Marine officers silver insignia. Oh God NO!

We laid him to rest at Arlington.

6 months before he deployed, we laid the foundation of a cabin by the water. “This will be our family’s legacy cabin Pops”! “For generations”!

It’s been a year. I eased up to the shore on my paddle board. Whoosh Whoosh, a bald eagle landed on a log right in front of me. Overwhelmed, I began to weep.

Word count -100

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wiscoff Write a complete story in 100 words or less based on the photo prompt. Click here for additional takes on the prompt.

-Goroyboy

26 Comments

      1. Thank you. One of our FF’rs is legally blind and she suggested I record my stories. I’m happy to know that someone else appreciates my audios. It’s good practice in any event. 😉

      1. It was my fiance. I was 17. He died on his way home from desert storm in a car accident. That time is very blurry for me. It predates my head injury so I have more of what I was told than actual memory. Billy was a good young man.

      2. Bear, Sigh, thank you for sharing your story..We often do things and don’t know “Why” we do them.. your comment and sharing your story is one of the reasons “Why” I write. Peace to you.

  1. G.,
    A much needed moment of release for the father. Very movingly conveyed, that feeling that his son had given his life for all that the bald eagle represents of what’s noble in this life, not a waste but an enduring testimony to all that matters. Thank you.
    pax,
    dora

    1. Thank you for the kind comment Dora. I appreciate the fact that the intended essence, was the essence perceived.. As a US Marine, while on active duty, the politics of the day was in the distance compared to day day life with fellow Marines whose primary focus was the task at hand, to serve something bigger than ourselves. Take care..

  2. I read Miles Rost’s post, then yours, because they are side by side in the link page. I think you guys collaborated 🙂 Well done. I don’t understand, though, why such a message has to be delivered in the middle of the night.

    1. Hi Gran:) thanks for checking in and the nice comment. It’s is my understanding that in consideration of the family, an ASAP notification is the protocol so as to hear it directly and professionally rather than on the news or other sources. Middle of the night might be more common if the loss is overseas in a different time zone. ✌️

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